What exactly do you not like? Everything, maybe?
And what would you do differently or have done?
We are still in the draft phase...
But basically, this style is intended, right? It's a matter of taste. I like it too, but not with three floors; it always looks like a multi-family house.
In my opinion, the entrance with the stairs does not enhance the house. And I can't shake the feeling that this entrance is due to the basement apartment. I would have left out the basement apartment if my assumption is correct, because I believe the house does not benefit from these visible three stories. If it is not going to be a basement apartment, one should consider whether the window needs to be so visible.
And of course, everything depends rather on the floor plan.