Very first floor plan draft of the ground floor

You can't really see a skewed photo of a sheet of paper very well. Therefore, take a photo from above, scanning would be much better.

That was not meant as a criticism... The one next to the toilet would be the entrance

But a note from me [emoji6]

Possibly swap living room and kitchen. Where will the terrace go? I like it except for the WC, entrance, [Speis] area. The [Speis] is too narrow, moving the stairs could make the hallway too narrow. If you keep the stairs, you also have this narrow strip upstairs.

What does the questioner want to ask us?
What is created within a few days is called sketches. Drafts should be somewhat more detailed.

For discussions, the pinned thread should be read on the one hand and the questionnaire filled out on the other.
In addition, a plan of the property, north arrow, etc. is missing.

We know absolutely nothing about you, what kind of house this is supposed to be for whom, where the street is located.

I strongly advise you to study the basics of architectural planning, at least to read through as many floor plan discussions as possible in this forum, so that you get a feeling for what does not work and where it can go.

Regards, Yvonne

I looked at the photo of the straight staircase he posted again. I wonder what he likes about it? I have a hunch....Cheers Men's Day. Karsten

I looked at the photo of the straight staircase he posted again. I wonder what he likes about it? I have a suspicion....Cheers Men's Day. Karsten

Unfortunately, it is quite obscured

However, you're not entirely wrong... I've been at a stick tournament since half past eight