Floor plan design city villa 145

Yes, it looks very good: EVERY hand drawing is valuable. It nurtures and trains your own engagement with the object, its dimensions, and connections. You also erased in it, so the learning effects are not only implemented but also didactically reinforced. Practice makes the almost-no-longer-amateur!
You have now reduced the corridor area a bit too sharply, but you seem to have understood essential basics, especially that the best place for the staircase exit is near the middle, where the distribution hub radiates.
What I don’t read from it is whether you were already wise enough to plan the upper floor before the ground floor.

Actually, I really started with the upper floor and then the ground floor… [...] But I’m glad that I was already able to implement something from you.

that’s why I have the chimney problem again.

The floor plans for this (I have adjusted the north arrow) and on the ground floor I symbolized a stove with the orange circle, which should also fit on the upper floor.

Thank you for the feedback. Actually, I really started with the upper floor and then only the ground floor… that's why I have the chimney problem again. But I'm glad that I was already able to implement something from you.

I played around a bit with the garage placement and the villa look. Unfortunately, the lawn seed didn’t make it all the way to the north ;) The office door is a transparent one. Of course, the windows could be a bit bigger; I based the dimensions on the original floor plan (due to budget). The bathroom probably needs to be a bit more refined :)