Hello,
I like this floor plan significantly better.
However, as has already mentioned, the passage from the entrance area to the hallway is very narrow due to the drawn-in closet. It is certainly enough to walk through, but visually it will always look like a "bottleneck."
The start of the stairs is, as in the first draft, in the immediate dirty area behind the front door. As already mentioned in the first draft, this will very likely lead to you bringing street dirt more into the upper floor.
I now also like the bathroom on the ground floor significantly better – would a second sink be an option for you? There is space for it...
A double-leaf door to the living room was also an option for us for a while. Then we paid attention everywhere we went to how these doors are used. Most of the time, one half was always open (and thus in the middle of the room), the other half was almost always closed.
We then decided to keep the wide entrance to the living room but to do it completely without a door – this creates a nice visual spaciousness.
In your place, I would consider completely removing the part of the living room wall between the kitchen door and office door. That would bring more light and spaciousness to the hallway area.
You should definitely still consider windows in the stairwell – otherwise, it will be a proper "darkroom," at least on the upper floor. You could install a window halfway up the stairs in the gable wall and/or at least one (better two) skylights in the stair/gallery area.
In the upper floor, I would also consider a skylight in the child 1 room – the room has the smallest window of all living spaces, and it also faces north. A double casement window facing west would make quite a difference.
Regards,
Dirk