Pantry change ok ... but otherwise I don't see any improvement? The furnishing is no longer visible either, not even a labeling of the rooms. How much roof overhang is there now in front of the kitchen? I estimate about 350 cm.
Kitchen still with the huge distance between the rows and the distant position of the refrigerator.
Also furnish the sheltered terrace. For example, I would design the floor-to-ceiling windows on the right and left of the bay window rather as normal windows, then you can at least place a corner bench or something in the niche of the sheltered terrace.
And then ... where are the contour lines? There should probably still be 5m of driveway in front of the garage. That means the house depth is about 19m on the south side. According to the site plan:
there is about a 300 cm height difference from the top left of the plan to 19 m south to the right of the plan ... how is that supposed to be solved? Your latest plans don't provide any explanation for that.
Window solution in front of the staircase:
Hmm .. cleaning?
Such a horizontal window in the living area:
I think it doesn't match the massive roof overhangs, nor do the French balconies. Especially since these are right at the partition wall of the two children's rooms. Furnish the children's rooms ... from the outside you can then nicely see the wardrobe wall offered there in full height.
No, that doesn't convince me, especially since I completely miss the height concept here.