An enormous improvement! Now it's almost really cool.
The pseudo-roof is somehow funny like that. But whether it will look the same in real life as on paper remains to be seen. Now one could almost get greedy and make the thing out of glass and open the rooms upstairs into the roof....
Above all, you need companies that are absolutely competent. I think with dread about our robber as a deterrent example:
I like the floor plan. You have to decide for yourselves about the open space with children, it has been mentioned several times as problematic.
I don't see the kitchen planning as perfect yet.
I still see issues with the windows. Too few or too small, especially here: bedroom, living room, bathroom, stairs.
The WC on the ground floor - is that supposed to be a shower? If yes, I would definitely enlarge it. Otherwise, it will be too cramped. The cloakroom can be a bit smaller - you have two of them anyway.
The basement should also be looked at again, especially the integration into the terrain (embankment, terrace, etc.)
I'm already looking forward to the pictures of the first groundbreaking.