With 44 m property length, you also have sunny areas in the north of the property even with a house in the middle of the property.
Privacy on the terrace is important to you ... for that you now accept 30 m of privacy screening towards the west, and probably also a bit of privacy screening towards the south. I just don’t think that is well solved.
Perhaps you also need to free yourself from thoughts like living room, terrace, and swimming pool belonging together. I see, for example, more of a unit in dining area-terrace ... then terrace-swimming pool ... possibly fitness room. Because when you’re wet from swimming, you generally don’t want to walk through the living area into the house, etc.
Storage 2 in the garage also doesn’t currently make much sense to me. Storage 1 is okay, everything related to garden, cars, bikes, outdoor sports. For example, I’m someone who prefers to create storage capacity where it can be used immediately. Therefore, for example, in hallways/wardrobes, rather inconspicuous 300 cm of storage for jackets/hats/scarves/shoes for all seasons and residents, because then you always have a full choice when leaving.
Clothes and general laundry like bed linens, towels, etc. rather near the bedrooms and bathrooms.
Things like seasonal decorations, rarely needed household items/kitchen items, vacuum cleaners, mops, but also supplies, in my opinion, can very well populate a kind of pantry/storage room near the kitchen or adjacent living spaces where you also need the decorations.
And I do think that an architect can bring in completely different ideas, simply because they have a completely different range of experience due to their profession. I like to plan and sketch, as you can see here, but I quickly notice that I tend to fixate on once-found solutions regarding execution. And I would really let a professional handle it here, especially since they also see the house as a whole, also regarding execution ... such as your offset or oversized upper floor.