The kitchen would be too small for me and the children's room I too narrow. Here, adding a 3rd gable / dormer could improve the design and ease the layout. The door at the roof peak, in my opinion, will not work as is. It opens into the 1.5m line. Either rotate it and see if that's enough or use a sliding door. I would not move the entrance to children's room I forward and would rather place a large window in the hallway instead.