You don’t find our floor plan successful. That’s okay. But the way you present yourself here and give advice on how, in your opinion, a floor plan should be developed, I find condescending and also inappropriate.
My introductory remark simply and neutrally stated that, in my opinion, it makes little sense to discuss a finalized drawing of a sketch as if it were already a submission plan. The plan may have all the "authentic features" of a "finished" plan, but qualitatively it is still at the "round of sixteen" stage.
And I am certainly not the only one who has also pointed out
which two defects lie at the "foundation" of the planning: namely an overly strong fixation on a certain house type as the desired outcome, and conversely the ignorance of the topography of the building plot. It’s not just about the width alone: many other families with multiple children and multiple cars also have to cope with not being able to spread out their building ensemble in Cinemascope style on less than 20 m plot width.
The approach I recommended in Ev-Marie86’s thread – by the way also my mantra in our private messages – does not claim to be a universal remedy, but it has actually proven to help planning beginners learn to walk more quickly.