Why did the draft turn out the way it is now? A mix of many examples from various magazines, inspections, etc.
What exactly in this draft comes from magazines? Which viewing axis did you adopt from great examples in the media? What are you particularly proud of?
For 2 people, I would come up with something better above.
I like the bathroom. I find the bed wall too short. Since you are only planning for 2 people, more space should be chosen here.
Basically, I think it is coherent – the kitchen, however, is somewhat boring. You should decide whether it is closed or open. Nobody here knows your train of thought.
Regards, Yvonne