I share the general opinion here, first of all a very nice floor plan. Besides a few other minor things that were mentioned here, I would plan one point completely differently (not because it is currently trendy, but because I personally like it much better ;)).
Orientation of the kitchen/dining area and living room. Since the living room area is separated, the family will mostly spend time in the open kitchen area (even if the intermediate door is open), at least when it is bright. Exactly this space should have the exit to the main terrace and south. Additionally, in summer the kitchen door is usually open to the outside (children run to the fridge, eating outside etc.), meaning the kitchen by the main terrace has many advantages. The route in the current version would be much too long for me (besides, otherwise you always carry dirt through the living room on the indoor path between kitchen and terrace).
In the living area you are mostly in the evening anyway, when it is dark, so you need the connection to the main terrace much less. Also, the living area - terrace path is a route that is used much less than from kitchen to terrace.
The second small point has already been mentioned: washing machine and dryer in the dressing room... I don’t think your clothes will be happy about that, even with controlled residential ventilation.