It's a shame that you don't show the ground floor, that confuses many. Especially if the unpleasant entrance area is there now, if I understood that correctly. Something like that is quickly copied and the changes are drawn in by hand. I think the plan is good at first, except for the parents' bathroom. Not everything is immediately clear. Are there sloping ceilings in the attic? If so, how high is the knee wall and where is the 2-meter limit? Is the roof terrace "cast on"??? If so, what does the structural engineer say about that? I would also be interested in the water drainage of the kitchen. Unfortunately, the kitchen is particularly difficult to see. It would be best if you drew the cabinets in color. Are the windows on the exterior wall at the top of the plan already existing?