In the meantime, I have taken a closer look at the development plan (not directly at the municipality, where you can only order it for forty euros; therefore, I made do with your plan photos).
In terms of height, the ground floor level there should already be at most "-0.66" and probably requires an exception for the planned location; my proposal regarding the garden-adjusted height does not seem compatible with this. The eaves height specification of 4.50 m (= "+2.84") would probably not play along either.
A storage space requirement of 5.50 m in front of the garage prevents my proposal to rotate the garage towards the street—unless it were shifted to the left side of the plan and accessed from the right side street instead of the bottom side of the plan. However, this would place it at a higher level, which would thwart my plan to have a better view over it.
An entrance from the right side of the plan, which appeals to me due to more suitable heights, would mean a long way from the garage to the house—unless the back door of the garage were regularly used for that, or the enclosure of the cars were even waived, and a carport used instead.
The roof pitch of the house is required to be at least 30°. The limitation of the offset in the shed roof would still allow for a split level, but overall the heights speak rather against this (or, respectively, would then force a one-and-a-half-story design).
Well then. You like this stepped terrace, so there is no need to bend over backwards to make it obsolete. I would have liked to see the elevations changed significantly, because in my opinion, that would have improved almost every change. Stylistically, I am of the opinion that the house is not suitable for folk music allergy sufferers on the outside, but the photos of the neighboring houses on the municipality website clearly show that it fits in. Nevertheless, I find it worth changing how much the window formats and positions between the ground floor and upper floor are the same. Normally, I am the first and loudest admirer when planners do not create too much of a mixed window salad. In this case, however, I find it carried out with excessive strictness, especially because the matches top/bottom create a two-family house appeal.
I am actually only really "unhappy" with the skylight of the guest WC.
In summary: the planned height levels are, if you like the terrace as it is, alright (or only costly to make "nicer"). I would expect a breakthrough for the floor plan from relocating the entrance to the right side of the plan (along with the possibility to bring the house closer to this street / make it "wider" and possibly even enable a non-strictly straight but still longitudinal (also ridge-parallel) staircase). But even if you stick with this basic form (which I see neutrally) and also keep the valley-side entrance (which I find unfavorable), the floor plan will work in any case without this box frame of load-bearing walls lying crosswise in the middle around the hallway. This can certainly be done more nicely. As I said, compare it once to VE1. If I understand correctly, this VE5 is the one with the most incorporations of your ideas (except for this hallway box), but from the architect's point of view (which I share) it is the one with the greatest effort in terrain modeling.