The drawing has the charm of a creative mind, but why do the doors overwhelm the one sitting on Tö? (Why is he sitting in the dark while the person showering is fumbling in front of the window? Why is there extra space in the front area of the guest WC? And why choose the longest path for the wastewater?) Sorry, proper reading. That would be my criticism, but the execution of the drawing confuses me, as mentioned above.