Floor plan of the mezzanine floor approx. 155 sqm

Hello everyone
I'm putting our floor plan up for discussion here. I also have a second floor plan variant for the upper floor with 2 children's rooms. What might still need to be changed?
The entrance faces south/east.
If more information is needed, please let me know.
Thanks in advance
Regards
bau.herr

Development plan/restrictions
Plot size 651 sqm
Slope no
Site occupancy index 0.3
Floor area ratio n/a
Building window, building line and boundary n/a
Edge development yes outbuildings
Number of parking spaces 2
Number of stories 1
Roof shape with pitch
Architectural style n/a
Orientation n/a
Maximum heights/limits 9.0 m
Requirements of the builders
Architectural style, roof shape, building type hipped roof, urban villa
Basement, floors no, 2
Number of people, ages 3, 33, 33, 2
Space requirements on ground floor, upper floor
Office no
Overnight guests per year 6
Open or closed architecture open
Conservative or modern construction modern
Open kitchen, kitchen island yes/yes
Number of dining places
Fireplace no
Music/stereo wall
Balcony, roof terrace yes
Garage, carport yes
Utility garden, greenhouse no
Further wishes/special features/daily routine, also gladly reasons why this or that should not be
House design
Who is the planner:
Planning office
What do you particularly like? Why?
What do you not like? Why?
Price estimate according to architect/planner: n/a
Personal price limit for the house, incl. equipment: €320,000
Preferred heating technology: gas heating
If you have to forgo anything, which details/extensions
-can you forgo: possibly garage
-can you not forgo

You are making it a bit difficult for the other discussants with EG and OG as PDF and OG alternative as image and site plan in overwhelming image size.

I clearly prefer the alternative OG.

House design
Who is responsible for the planning:
Planning office

Really, Planning office (???) – are they authorized to submit plans, or ambitious amateurs who just know how to use a drawing program? – I see in the drawing (PDF) besides ignorance of the system behind the building regulations also the thermal construction error of the shared garage wall. The same alignment of the garage front and entrance bay window also doesn’t look good; I would move the garage back by half a meter.

From me, regarding the question, you can only hear a "better than" relatively speaking, never an "looks good as is" absolutely, because you can chase me away with a flounced skirt "Tuscany." That is, in my opinion, the "Toast Hawaii" of architecture. Gelsenkirchen Baroque 2000.

Hello

The floor plan (PDF) was made by a planner. I made the alternative floor plan for the upper floor myself, as well as the outdoor area. So please forgive me the format mix.


What is the problem with the garage not getting its own wall but being built onto the building?
Whether we move the garage I have to discuss with my wife. Thanks for the hint. Besides, I like Toast Hawaii ;-)

Where is the problem that the garage does not get its own wall but is built onto the building?

If the cold building is attached to the warm building without its own wall, this "facilitates" heat loss. A separation, already at the foundation slab, is supposed to improve this.

Whether we have to move the garage, I have to discuss with my wife.

She will understand that at first glance when she sees it in a perspective view. With the garage front aligned with the entrance bay window, the bay window no longer projects forward, but the building in the area in between "recedes."

Architects who learned their profession before CAD immediately notice such things, i.e., they simply do not do such things.

You can cut out images from screenshots of the PDF; this makes it easier to follow the discussion without having to switch between viewing programs.

I can only recommend furnishing the rooms as you plan.

A kitchen with a room width of 308 cm and a cooking island, but then walls again to the dining area, cannot work.

Entrance is southeast... then the garage is in the most beautiful part of the garden and the utility room is on the best sunny side of the house. Afterwards, the house becomes very dark. How many children does family planning foresee? How many children's rooms does room planning provide for? Children's rooms under 12 sqm, but bedrooms over 12 plus each with a walk-in closet. Those are the trending priorities ;) Otherwise, the house probably already exists several times somewhere as a standard, the floor plan is very common, but here somewhat enlarged. The utility room is difficult to furnish, I would remove 2 doors! Where will the wardrobe be placed in the entrance hall? Under the stairs? There will be no shower for the guest and a double bed does not fit into the bedroom... Regards, Yvonne